Our class focus for writing was about forming paragraphs. I learnt that a paragraph is a group of related sentences. I learned about the acronym TipTop. It stands for Time, Person, Topic and Place. The video that I watched really helped me. I learned that when I change the Time, Person, Topic and Place I need to start a new paragraph.
I am getting the idea but I will keep practicing.
THE ROOM!!
As I was pushing the door I could feel a slight touch, on my back. I was breathless. All I was thinking about was someone about to hurt me, I was about to faint.
Suddenly I could hear for help, it was coming from the dark, scary room. I started to walk in the room, it was a little girl, she was wearing ripped clothes and brown curly hair. “ Hey, what's your name?” I asked, “ It's Annabelle” she whispered, “ Are you ok?,” I asked. “B-BEHIND-D YOU-U!!” She yelled. I could really hear what she was saying, all I could hear was “Behind”.I slowly walked back without looking behind.
Once I got out of the room I ran as fast as I could but suddenly I tripped on a book, even though I tripped I got up and kept ongoing. I got outside and went home.
Finally, I arrived at my destination. Straight away when I walked in the door I grabbed my phone and called 111 “Hello there is a monster at my work” I cried in fear, “There is nothing such as monsters, is this a prank call, I’m hanging up bye” He yelled with anger.
I ran up the stairs and jumped into bed trying to go to sleep, but I could still hear the voice of the little girl calling for help.
The next morning I woke up and went for a run. I finished my run and went home. Before I could even walk through the door there was a hideous house that lived across the street, I remembered that the house across the street wasn’t there before. An old wrinkly man has moved in.
Some days have passed and I have realized that the old man has never smiled.
I was walking home from school and I felt a bad feeling about going home. I arrived at my house. I walked into my house and the old man was on my couch, he was giving me a dead stare. I ran up the stairs and I knew that he was the man behind me when I was in the Dark terrifying room. He walked into my room with a knife and…..
